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poetry

baby come back to me

baby i love you so

baby you are my heart

baby come back to me

baby i love you so

baby you are my heart

 

visions of you

bring tears to my eyes

i need you so

i want you more

i want to be yours

i want you to be mine

together there is nothing

we can't do

you're my all

my heart

 

baby come back to me

baby i love you so

baby you are my heart

baby come back to me

baby i love you so

baby you are my heart

 

your sad eyes cut through me

cut through my bones

making my heart heavy

i can't leave you alone

i'm lost

i'm lost without you

 

baby come back to me

baby i love you so

baby you are my heart

baby come back to me

baby i love you so

baby you are my heart

 

i can't think of anything

but you

your gentle touch

your soul aching kisses

i want you in my arms

i want to be with you

 

baby come back to me

baby i love you so

baby you are my heart

baby come back to me

baby i love you so

baby you are my heart

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Drew a blank for a title. The voices in my head will be collecting a pink slip over this.

Reviews

[BelowABridge]

song like. very lyrical and repetitive but not redundant at all. I enjoyed this.

[Albert Freeman]

she better come back to me since it's you lol

[Nely Amorim]

very lovely poem, hope she comes back to you :)

[Lori]

Very lovely and lyrical. It really sings to the reader. You have such a fine ear, using repetition and off-rhymes very deftly. You really show why poetry was invented: LOVE.