Floating

Floating

A Poem by Albert Freeman
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FLOATING

 

You have me floating amongst the clouds

Your love has me singing from the highest mountains

Your love gives me strength

There is nothing I can't do with you at my side

The taste of your lips send me floating

amongst the stars

 

You have me reaching for more and wanting you

forever as just mine

You hold the key to my heart

All I am is dedicated to making you happy

Your love has me singing from the highest mountains

The taste of your lips send me floating amongst the stars

© 2008 Albert Freeman


Author's Note

Albert Freeman
Short poem. Trying to restart the creative juices. Dedicated to Stormz of course :)

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Very nice, Albert...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very emotional and love-inspiring! I particularly adore the repeat of the lines-
"Your love has me singing from the highest mountains" and
"The taste of your lips send me floating amongst the stars"
Sometimes, when i read it out loud, the lines seemed sort of off, but that is probably just the way I read it.
The person you dedicated this too is very lucky :P

Posted 16 Years Ago


beautiful baby :D you already have me as just yours xxxx

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Albert Freeman
Albert Freeman

raymond, MS



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I'm one of 5 boys born to my mother and father. My dad served 23 years in the Army. I served 6 years in the Air Force and enjoyed traveling to Korea, Japan, and Maryland while in. My interests vary, b.. more..

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