Charlie and his magic candy

A story in 69 words

Charlie and his magic candy

 

    Charlie held his candy tightly. It had been a magical journey from the candy shop and back home. The old owner had told him true! The candy in the clothe bag did speak to him. It held the promise of such a wondrous journey.

 

    "You're all mine," he whispered to the bag as he closed the door and put all eleven locks in place.

Author's Note

I think I just learned I can't write very concisely :)

Reviews

[Nely Amorim]

lol how did i know your story would be about candy... remember i have the keys to those locks muahahahaaa nice write babe xxx