Six word story

Six word story

A Story by Albert Freeman
"

Just me experimenting with my writing.

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She smiled.

 

 

I laughed.

 

 

We danced.

© 2008 Albert Freeman


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Albert Freeman
Vote for Kodoss/Not Kang.

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Albert, I love it! A dear friend of mine stumbled upon a book one day while we were in Barnes & Noble... I think it was titled Six Word Memoirs. Anyhow, it is full of six words memoirs such as you have written here. We have had so much fun writing these back and forth... (they make great text messages). You've inspired me... I think I'll post a few of my own. This is a great one, my friend. Write on!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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nice! short, sweet and to the point! nice write!
smiles,
jess

Posted 16 Years Ago


How bizarre, this is the second time I stumbled across this today. First time was on the Smiths website, six word memoir submissions! I bought the book of these and have been writing some myself since although I didn't post any yet. I think they are great fun and it's amazing how much you can pack into just 6 words as you have here. Very nice.






Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A waltz to break down the wall. Lovely image. Well done with just six words. Kudos.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Albert, I love it! A dear friend of mine stumbled upon a book one day while we were in Barnes & Noble... I think it was titled Six Word Memoirs. Anyhow, it is full of six words memoirs such as you have written here. We have had so much fun writing these back and forth... (they make great text messages). You've inspired me... I think I'll post a few of my own. This is a great one, my friend. Write on!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aww thats a cute write.. i liked it.. sweet and simple. but who is Kodoss or Kang?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 28, 2008

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Albert Freeman
Albert Freeman

raymond, MS



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I'm one of 5 boys born to my mother and father. My dad served 23 years in the Army. I served 6 years in the Air Force and enjoyed traveling to Korea, Japan, and Maryland while in. My interests vary, b.. more..

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