O Wondrous Love

O Wondrous Love

A Poem by Albert Freeman
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O Wondrous Love

I am enchanted by your beauty from afar

Such maidenly innocence

leaves me dazzled and speechless

 

I gaze from afar and long to have your token

Travelling the lands far and wide

I seek fame, I seek fortune

Not for self glory, but for the

joy of winning your heart

 

I listen in envy as the bards sing of your beauty

Knights across the land vy for just a sigh from you

You have enchanted us all with your grace

and wit

 

Listening from across the ball room

I hear your laughter as you flirt

with suitors from far and wide

It fuels my determination,

my need to be amongst them

 

Kneeling before your father, our king

I am knighted before the powers of the land

Dedicating my sword in the name of king and country

I fight for you, I long for you

 

Just one kiss

Just one touch

to slake this thirst

to slake this need

 

I shall win your love

my heart will be sated

With you in my arms all things are possible

O wondrous love

O love of my life

© 2008 Albert Freeman


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Oh boy, someone's got it bad. I know where you're coming from, Albert. There is no drug like love. A great poem. Sam

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

what an emotional tribute! who could be so lucky?

Posted 16 Years Ago


Albert-- did you really claim you weren't a poet--lol.. yea-- wow.. you really honed this masterpiece
to perfection- delivered with passion that holds the idea of praising love as only bards of romance
can- the desirous ambitions ring like bells- the reader can full sense the adoration, treasured affection
held for the one you love and hold close to your heart with full effect- as admiration sings to the reader
beautiful- woundrous and always well written perspective from the depth of the heart- thanks

Just one kiss
Just one touch
to slake this thirst
to slake this need


I shall win your love
my heart will be sated
With you in my arms all things are possible
O wondrous love
O love of my life



Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautiful words once again... I'm amazed that you claim your not a poet... you have exceeded all expectations but then i knew u were a secret romantic...lol you can't deny it now baby..!! How could I love you otherwise? xxx

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Albert Freeman
Albert Freeman

raymond, MS



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I'm one of 5 boys born to my mother and father. My dad served 23 years in the Army. I served 6 years in the Air Force and enjoyed traveling to Korea, Japan, and Maryland while in. My interests vary, b.. more..

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