(I See You Love!) Je vous vois aimer !

(poetry) poésie

I See You Love!

 

I see you love!
I see the way you smile at me
I see the coy seductive look in your eyes

I see you love!
I see the way you move your body
I see the way you sway to music

I see you love!
I see the invitation in your moves
I see the sparkle in your eyes

I see you love!
I see the way you heat me up
I see the way you turn me on
I see you love!

 

Je vous vois aimer !

 

Je vous vois aimer !

Je vois la manière que vous souriez à moi

Je vois le regard séduisant effarouché dans vos yeux

 

Je vous vois aimer !

Je vois la manière que vous déplacez votre corps

je vois la manière vous balancez en musique

 

Je vous vois aimer !

Je vois l'invitation dans vos mouvements que

je vois l'étincelle dans vos yeux

 

Je vous vois aimer !

Je vois la manière vous me chauffent vers le haut que

je vois que la manière vous me tournent dessus

je vous vois aimer !

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

All reviews welcome. (English to French via Babel Fish)

Reviews

[Clarisse Nanoit]

I like this. It almost has a beat to it, just reading it. Very nice. Thanks for entering it into my contest. Best of luck to you in it. Will you tell your friends about the contest? I fear I will hardly get any entries. Once again, a nice piece!!
KH

[Jessica Benfield]

wow, this is so incredibly amazing... im a french student, and i absolutely love this write! i loved the heat in this one - almost like a candle dancing in the flame of love. amazing write!
smiles,
jess

[Nely Amorim]

very sexy babe... i read the French translation too and it's definately sexy... xxxx love you

[Astrid Hamilton]

This is so pretty; an enchantment of what it means to pay attention to someone.
And I like that you wrote the poem in French below the english translation of your heart.
It makes this already sensual poem so much more seductive.

[closed account]

very sexy!! this was so soothing, I can picture a man laying back and watching all the wonders of his lady!! geatness!! :-)