Good Morning

poetry

Gaiety making me smile as you awake

Observant of the shine that comes
within your green eyes

Ocean waves calling for us and saying your name

Dancing with you as you arise

Magic in your smile leaving me intoxicated

Ovations of joy carrying me into your arms

Radiant is your beauty that leaves me enchanted

Navigating waves of joy to be nearer

Idealism turning into reality upon hearing your voice

Nuzzling your neck to pull you closer

Guiltless in my happiness with you

Burning with this endless desire

Awakening with the wonder of it all

Bacchanalian with boundless energy

Yielding to this eternal need

Author's Note

all reviews welcome. poetry to the lovely Melanie (take a bow) xxx

Reviews

[Jessica Benfield]

awww... this is so beautiful... its truly a wonder - waking up to the one we love most, seeing their lovely face, knowing how much you love them... an amazing surprise every morning, just seeing the morninglight sparkle in their eyes... a never-ending joy... amazing work, albert, you describe this lovely gift so beautifully, absolutely amazing work...
smiles,
jess

[waywithwords]

I take my hat of to you my friend who has the same surname as mine. Your poem was elloquent and the imagery set this poem on fire. A fire that will burn forever in your beautiful written words. Anne.xxx
ps you look a beautiful couple and she is a lovely looking lady, and I hope you have a lovely life together. smiles.

[Sally Edwards]

Beautiful poem, Melanie is a lucky lady and looking at her picture below very beautiful too, I can see how she inspires you, sighhhhh, I'm a hopeless romantic LOL, I wish you both the very best together. Your words convey your love for her perfectly it radiates through your words.

[Nely Amorim]

Darling, everyday you bring love to me in new & wonderful ways, I have been blessed to have met you. I can only imagine our lives together will be bliss.. thank you for the lovely poetry and the inspiration you give to me in writing mine. I love you... xxx