Spring Renewed

Spring Renewed

 

Spring has finally come

you can taste it in the air

see it all around

from the tallest trees turning green with leaves

to the smallest flowers starting to bloom

birds moving from tree to tree

with the buzz of bees ringing new

 

Spring has been renewed

with it comes hope sprung free and new

the grass growing thick and plentiful

the laughter of children running around

bringing joy and happiness

 

Spring is in the air

dancing all around

it's a time for renewal

a time for change

thoughts are blooming

with words ever plentiful

 

Spring is in the air

bringing a bounty of new poetry

words flowing like newly made honey

what a joy it is

to revel in spring renewed

 

Author's Note

All reviews are welcome.

Reviews

[Astrid Hamilton]

it's a time for renewal

a time for change



...Those lines are perfect to both the reader's soul, but mostly the dear poet's.
Without actually utilizing such encouragement, the soul will stay in darkness,
festering on hate; hate will turn into only a nightmare within,
and no one will be able to save the self except just so.
But love, will always reign through, if one believes and does not deceive;
the leaves do not deceive the trees,
the hand of God does not prod
in staying where swaying is solemn,
and this poem reminds me of the beauty of HOPE reigning, enduring.

[Janyce Helen Van Es]

This expresses my feelings here. I watch hundreds of birds building nests around the lake community I live in.

with the buzz of bees ringing new

Spring has been renewed

it's a time for renewal

to revel in spring renewed




These lines with new and renewed need some word changes. You have a lot of "renew" in this poem. Since it doesn't have a metered rhyming scheme, you could replace some of them and still have the same theme.

[Michael X]

singing the praises of renewel, awakening the readers heart to the loving wonderment of happiness, expressed with jubilee, carefree, encouragingly blissfull, painted with wonderfully devised imagery reflecting all things representing springtime, i could feel the energy emanting forth with uplifting effect through your excellently written words albert, beautifully done, i'm encouraged after reading this.

[J. James Reider]

This is a really good piece... It is so well organized and has a wonderful flow to it... and when I was reading it I almost felt like spring was blooming inside of my head... THAT in itself is a pretty amazing feat considering the mood that I was in... Thank you for writing a piece that improved my mood!

[Jessica Benfield]

this is amazing... i do wish spring would come sooner, especially since a freezing winter *freezing, but we never get snow! lol* beautiful write, i love spring!!!
smiles,
jess

[Nely Amorim]

Spring is many things, renewal being natures way of starting life again. I love spring because all you thought might be dead gets new buds and starts again. Basically everything gets another chance. Love the poem babe, just one critique... I think you meant to say AIR not EAR in the second line?

Love you baby xx