Something

poetry

S O M E T H I N G

 

something comes across my

so vague and flitting

i can't recall

a wondrous burst of colors

with images

desperate to recall

such simple thoughts

something wonderful and airy

an inner utopia to something better

something came across my mind

i wonder what it was

will it ever come again

will it ever

Author's Note

Reviews are nice.

Reviews

[Janyce Helen Van Es]

I like the format-first line last word-should that be "me"?
Other than you need your "i" to grow up and be a big "I" in this, hehe.

Sounds like a Spiritual awakening. Light, dreamy and smooth.

[Nely Amorim]

illusive as thoughts, i liked it.. (but i think theres a word missing in the first line :(
great work as usual... your working hard here :D