How I Feel

poetry

How I Feel

 

How I feel for you is more than I can say

You feel me with hope, you feel me with love

To have you in my arms makes all my dreams come true

The trust you have for me, takes my breath away

Brings new joy and vanquishes all doubts

A love like this is eternal and ever growing

You make me complete more than I've ever been

This is how I feel and I owe it all to you

 

Author's Note

Constructive criticism is always welcome.

Reviews

[Jinx]

This is beautiful and speaks deeply of the one you love. I like how you used the word "feel" in this, its placement was perfect. Others would probably correct you on that, telling you to change it to "fill," but nay, it's meant to be there. Well done.

[Nely Amorim]

I'm always thrilled to hear your words of love, I'm so glad your mine :D and you know you make me feel more loved and cherished than I have ever felt before... xxx

oops.. i'm supposed to review your poetry... awesome work babe as always...lol love you xxx