At Your Best

poetry

At your best


At your best you make me better
Your love for me has made me dream the impossible
At your best I can lift mountains and walk across oceans
You're a positive in my life and never a negative
At your best you uplift my spirits and make me smile
When you feel as I feel it makes my heart leap with joy
At your best confusion in me melts away as love supplants all
Never wonder why, because in you all life's joys are possible
At your best you are love, the love of my life
At your best you are everything to me
Love of my life, love for all time
At your best

Author's Note

Constructive criticism is always welcome.

Reviews

[Michael X]

Very nice reading Albert, very nice, written from the soul, beautifully done,
many aspects can be pondered, in light of the subject, and the being how you
treasure as well as view the one you whom you hold close to the heart.

"At your best you are love, the love of my life

the supporting emphasize on the line above encapsulate the pinnacle essence
of what you are defining, as a hearts song, classic form entwining passionate
surrender, the way you signified the pretense, "at" shows the quality of thought
put into every line, into every word, as well as its heart touching effect, mike

[vanishing]

This is As romance should be!
I loved the image you scribe with words
written as a reflective pondering
takes the reader's heart and Makes

them feel with the author
is feeling at the moment of surrender
magnificent Love poetry!
thanks

[Nely Amorim]

woops i'm assuming this poem is about me......lol

[Nely Amorim]

At my Best is how you always make me feel baby... I love you... xxx can't wait till we're together again xxx

[Christina-Marie]

At your best, your the greatest friend in the world!