I love you...but do you realy love me???

I love you...but do you realy love me???

A Poem by Alayna

I love you

I tell you this every day

I mean every word i say

I would never lie 2 you

Baby you are my every thing

I love you more than I have ever loved anyone

You the one person i would give up everything 2 be with

You say you love me

But then you make me wonder

I know im not ur only one

I just want 2 know you realy love me 2

I hate hearing about your other girlfriends

and hearing "Its my boo baby"all week long,

noing your not talking about me kinda hurts

No it huts it hurts bad but i cant let you see that

I hide it because i know you wouldint care even if i told you it hurt

or at least it wouldint change things

But when you Kiss me that all fades away

Baby when its just me and you

that is all i want

baby i want 2 be your only one

the second you tell me that you want 2 be my only one i will drop everyone else

because baby i love you

I wish i could show you how much

I try every time i see you

you may always talk about "Boo baby"or"sexy"

but hopefuly one day you will care that much about me your

"Baby Girl"

"I Love You Pickles"

 

Love you're Baby girl

© 2008 Alayna


Author's Note

Alayna
This is what i only wish my baby could understand........

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its so much so emotions inside the heart.On one side you are hurt at the attitude of the loved one.yet you hope and wish that one day you will be the one and only baby gal of the dear.You hide these emotions inside you,without expressing to the concerned person,your concerns will remain the same.A good expression of true emotions.

Posted 16 Years Ago


have you tried telling her this. i like it though you use real emotions in this poem and you can tell that you are actually feeling these things.


FrOgBeAn


Posted 16 Years Ago


This is good. I think you placed a lot of emotions into what you wrote. It really comes through in what you said. Good write.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 31, 2008

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Alayna
Alayna

clarmont, NC



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My name is alayna im not a huge writer i just write what i feel when i feel it or what's going on around me im in high school so lot's of stuff goes around that gives me something to think or write ab.. more..

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