The day as a receipt.

I just bought today...let's look at the receipt, shall we?

Fatigue.......................$9:00
Coldness.....................$9:10
Work..........................$9:15
Think of her...............$12:00
Think of her more.......$12:30
Hunger........................$1:00
Work more...................$1:30
Leave work...................$4:00
Eat...............................$6:00
Go to Boy Scouts............$6:45
Have fun........................$7:00
Hike..............................$7:30
See her there.................$8:15
He's there too.................$8:15
Pain...............................$8:20
They leave......................$8:25
I leave............................$8:45
Meet friends at Subway....$8:50
Have lots of fun...............$9:00
I'm home.........................$9:25
Sadness.........................$10:00

Total...............The average day
Paid amount...................Poetry
Change...........................Grief

Have a nice day. Come again soon.

Author's Note

I know it's not a poem, but I didn't know where else to put it.

Reviews

[Melanie Nicole]

I love this! This is a really great...poem thing. It's very creative and smart! :DD

[Tayler]

That was amazing. I loved the way you summed everything up. This is one of the best 'peoms' I've read since joining WC :)

[Libby McKeown]

Conceptually, this poem is brilliant. I mean, just brilliant. I love it. In fact, I'm thinking about taking my day back to walmart for a refund, if I could only find my receipt. . . .