You and me.

This....is about me and the most amazing girl in the world.

You're amazing.
You're fun.
You're gorgeous.
You're crazy.
You're perfect.

Me.
I love you.
I'm boring.
I'm alright.
I'm not that great looking.
I'm insane, not crazy.
I'm so far from perfect.

You.
You derserve so much more than me.
You deserve to be happy.
You deserve to be with someone who loves you.

Me.
I do not deserve you.
I do not deserve happiness.
I do not want to lose you.

Author's Note

I think it's alright. Not the best poem, but it tells the truth.

Reviews

[Melanie Nicole]

This poem makes me sad :(
And I don't even know why.
I do like it.
It's like....we opened you up.
and this was what we found.

[Jacqueline Lopez]

Yes, it does tell the truth and it's very heart felt! Nice, my friend!

[O Bubbly_snowflake *]

It does tell the truth. In a very blunt way that too. But its good. I acutally like it a fair bit too. I prefer rhyme poems, but the sense of reality in this poem makes it work quite well.

Looking forward to more of your work.