Coeur - We are the human race, navigators of divine order and biblical disaster for 7 million years, living on a speck of dust in a staggering immensity that despite its size can't hold back our questions in search of answers. I've often had a few myself. Really enjoyed this Coeur. Nice work. Namyh
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
This was an amazing review, I really appreciate it. Thank you XD
This was a thought provoking read, very pleasant, asks all the right questions and leaves all answers up for personal questioning.
Keep it up!
-David:)
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you ^^
7 Years Ago
My pleasure:) can't wait to read more of your stuff!
We are indeed undefinable. This was refreshing, finding something that asks so many questions. Trying to define what's intangible, and it's breathtaking. These are thoughts I have had myself many a time.
Bonjour, Mademoiselle.
C'est la première fois que je lis votre travail, je pense. Je suis impressionné par votre poème. C'est très fort et puissant, très significatif.Je l'aime vraiment. Félicitations!:)
P.S.
Pardonne mon mauvais français, ma nationalité n'est pas française :D
'That’s the beauty of this life, ~ We don’t have to know.~ We are nothing, ~ But we are everything.'
An incredible stream of questions, thoughts, expressing the need to find Truth. In a sense, by forming your list, you've shown what concerns you most about relationship, about reality, about what and who human beings are.
You've written clearly, used fine phrasing. That four lined summation is brilliantly said.
Who are we? That's the beauty of this piece. Am I defined by my rhymes? Does this review define you? I know it's a little silly to say perhaps but from beginning to end I was hooked, all from a simple question. Good read! Thanks for sharing!
Omg Couer... your poem nailed it!
I LOVED IT SO MUCH!
It's really thought provoking and has reality into it as well of course!
"We are nothing,
But we are everything."
Amazing...
Keep it up!
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thanks ^^ I always look forward to your positive reviews.
Hey there, I'm just a hopeless poet that couldn't write a decent piece to save my life, but it's my first love so I keep uploading. My poetry typically doesn't rhyme, I normally do freeverse. Other th.. more..