Gift

Another sappy romantic poem I wrote while up late one night

My gift to you is my love
Given from deep within my heart
It is the best I have to offer
And its yours until this earth we depart

You have captured a part of me
A part so very fragile that I am in fear
For it is my heart I have lost
To you my love, the one I hold most dear

I chose to love you now
With all that I have and all that I am
And I pray that God follows us
To guide our steps as we cross this land

For it is with His blessings
We will live most at peace with each other
For He is the reason after all
We found one another ........ I Love You!

Reviews

[Icarus]

Athena, it takes a wonderful heart to even be able to pen something beautiful like this. For me this was a true expression of love and hey, I like sappy romantic stuff!! A great write and inspirational write for me. When I read something like this it makes me want to write also! Inspiring others is a great gift. Well done!!

[Athena]

Thanks a lot for reading my work...I truly appreciate it:)

[Jack...]

This is beautiful and deeply filled with love. Some on this site have called me the romantic, but I think that honor belongs to you. Very nice

[Athena]

Thank you very much:)

[Chris]

Welcome back... good heart throughout the work.

[Athena]

Thanks for the kind review:)

[Chris]

I'm not kind... just very, very real

[*]

I know a little about hearts and how delicate they are. You've spoken from the bottom of yours with so much thoughtfulness and compassion every guy reading this poem can only envy the guy you speak of. You've done a great job of expressing your feelings, good for you.

[~ Stefanie ~]

This is so sweet and sentimental :) You wrote each line beautifully and did an excellent job displaying your emotions about your love for this person. Well done!

[Kaylor Mason]

This is so beautiful!! Your poetry is gorgeous! I wish we all could have love like this; the world would be a better place.

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Love is the greatest gift except for life that we have received from the Creator and it is by far the best gift we can offer another. You have caught the essence of both here. Our Maker's love for us and the ability we have to bestow/share that love with another.

[Jim Parson]

It doesn't get better than sappy romance! This is really beautifully said. It gave me warmth and a smile.

[Robin]

not enough romance in the world , your words flash a poetic smile

[Moflo]

Very nicely written. Great flow and rhymes. I liked it.