Cloning ME!

just a short rant!

I remember that day
When I was Cloned;
I was at My emotional zenith,
The day I met Me.

I liked Me.
I was charming and witty,
Always a gentleman;
Best of all, I was handsome.

I and Me had many conversations,
We got along well.
We discussed the weather, sports, women, and song;
Then Me and I had Our fun.

I and Me went to a park;
We played long and hard
With great delight,
Until a beautiful woman came upon our way.

She was attracted to Him over Me
(Or is that I over He, since He is Me?)
This attraction had happened before, where He got her
(Or is that I got she?)

Well, I had enough;
Me had done this one too many times to I.
I devised a plot to kill Me,
Where Me could be in death, yet I still alive.

One night, while Me slept,
But I was awake,
I took our gun
And slowly entered His, or My, room.

There I lay, I looked so peaceful;
I had no idea what was to happen.
I raised the gun to My head
And rested My finger on the trigger.

It was done, I had killed Me.
I was relieved,
Never again would I be jealous of Me,
For I am only I, no longer I and Me.

There remains one problem:
Am I I, or am I Me?

When I, or He, was Cloned,
The Clone, whether He or Me,
Knew everything that the original knew.
You tell Me, who am I? I or Me?

All this happened,
The day I met Me.

Reviews

[Chris]

strong emotions released... and still unresolved questions because it all about who we are...

[Ice Girl]

That was incredible!

[Kaylor Mason]

This is absolutely brilliant! I was laughing while reading it nearly the whole time. And of course, if you had two clones you could look at I and Him and call yourself "They"

[Patches I'm not so new..]

I enjoyed this it is diffirent it is refreshing and as Mr. Parson say, clever.
It has a sprite tone and sounds like the persona has yet to figure who he is and one day will come to the correct conclusion very entertaining thaks I really liked this.

[Jim Parson]

This was quite clever and much fun. I enjoyed reading it.

[Kelley]

I liked it. This show you can write in other styles besides romance.
I prefer romance and a touch of the dark side anyway good write.
thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Art Sun]

I am still trying to find out who me is...

nice work...

[Athena]

Tell me what u think. This is a stretch for me. I ususlly write romance...