The surfer

The surfer

A Poem by Alani
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another 5-7-5 haiku type

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A board and a man
with a hot sun-kissed tan
He's just catching waves

© 2011 Alani


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I`m much perfect at "Haiku`s" but yeah, your this haiku sounds good... it`s a very refreshing piece which burns of while cold flames of snow right in the chest ~~ into the bottom of the heart `~ with peace. Well done!

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Added on August 18, 2011
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Alani
Alani

Joburg, South Africa



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Most of the poems are now songs... you can take a listen to some of my songs at: www.soundcloud.com/alanikeiser ME: Singer-songwriter. I love Literature and poetry... I love stomping on crunchy dry.. more..

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