Stormtrooper

A really sweet guy inspired this!

She is alive

Finally she is brave

Don’t call out a number

As she has no age

With your sweet smooth humility

You’ve won her over

Here is where the love has been

With the Stormtrooper

Reviews

[BL]

drummers always get in on the action in bands and are all a bit crazy. That is a cool name and title for the poem you tell your tale so sweetly. Didn't quite get lines 3&4?

[Alani]

:) Thanks!
Lines 3 & 4 - he is a lot younger than I am... but when we brought up my age, he said that it matters not, as I look younger.

[BL]

Got it, that makes sense, he is right by the way

[Alani]

:D Glad to know I look like a youngen... I feel like one too!

[BL]

Ha, I bet you do, what's stopping you then?

[Alani]

:) Nothing, I guess... I'll let it flow naturally hehe

[BL]

I can't argue with that, sounds like a magnificent idea x

[Matching Socks]

"I sincerely miss those heavy metal bands
I used to go see on the landing in the summer
She fell in love with the drummer
She fell in love with the drummer, she fell in love"

WILCO - Heavy Metal Drummer

Loved your sweet poem. 💛



Read more: Wilco - Heavy Metal Drummer Lyrics | MetroLyrics

[Alani]

That's a pretty cool review! :) Thanks so much!

[Matching Socks]

It was my pleasure. :)

[willweb]

Girls always fall for the drummer. :) This was short and sweet and beautifully written Alani. I always enjoy reading your work.

[Alani]

haha.. Thanks! He is cute BUT! I did not fall for him. haha... he is my music producer. The only producer I have ever felt comfortable with. He also happens to be in a very successful and popular South African band: Zebra & Giraffe
:)

[willweb]

It was fun to read. If I ever see Zebra and Giraffe come to town, I'll be sure to look them up. :)

Do you live anywhere near Durban?

[Alani]

Nope... I am about 6 hours away from Durban - I was born in a town outside Durban. Have you been there?

[willweb]

No, I have a friend who lives there. Would like to visit sometime though.

[Alani]

Cool :) You should. It's lovely... but can get very hot!

[willweb]

I can deal with the heat. That wouldn't be a problem (I don't think) :)

[Alani]

Well, give it a go then!

[Stephen]

~~~ Umm, I think, that Sweet guy`s this hottest Stephen .. isn`t he? *Wink* ~~~

Very nice and a cute poem. I love how you express your fragrant feelings of your heart via words ~~ through this marvelous write. Lovely. Great job!! :)

[Alani]

hahah!
Nope... it's actually the guy in the picture attached to the poem :)
But thank you :)

[Stephen]

S**t. I again missed out the chance! *Wink* Lol .. but yeah .. i`m not feeling jealously, after all, i`m very hot than that guy .. So, yeah ... i`m glad, you get inspired by him but hope to make ya inspire by this hot Stephen too .. Ah! I know, it`s not that easy to make a beautiful Alani inspired by me so, yeah, I can say, I know, that guy`s not as hot as me but yeah .. He`s not as unlucky as me ... yeah, he`s very lucky to make a beautiful Alani inspired. Ha! Yeah, It`s all the time my pleasure to make some smiles on Alani`s charming face :)