Vaclyner's Rite

A Book by AlanThomas

This is the first chapter of the novel I've been working on. It's rather short, but since I've been making progress and seeing things that may need a little more, it may have a some added to it later.

Chapters

Vaclyner's Rite Chapter 1 "The Proud Liar"
Vaclyner's Rite Chapter 2 "The Lady's Messenger"

© 2014 AlanThomas

Author's Note

Am I showing and not telling? Also, how is the flow? If there are any glaring grammar mistakes, please let me know.

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Added on May 16, 2014
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Author

AlanThomas

Youngstown, OH

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I am writing my first novel. Currently, at 80K+ word count. But this changes every day, of course. I hope joining Writerscafe is the start of a wild journey! See you there! more..