star shatter

star shatter

A Poem by alan khan

rhythm is starting to beat through the current of our energy girl.. 

can you feel it? can you feel that pent up light, just burning to burst through in a terrible
and glorious way?

you're on your back.
your legs quiver.

i can taste you yet
i am no where near.

but when i reach that place,
when i allow that smell to seap into my soul
when i let that of holiest completely engulf my world

you and i will know what it is to live.

for i will place my hand on the side of your ankle, slide it up your leg
 slowly 

i will brush my cheek against the tender part of your inside thigh.

finally pushing my mouth against the holy.
find my tongue a home in the warm
confines of your moist
tasty
and firm lips.


hungry now i will annihilate furiously.

you will shout and shatter star light.
the night sky will crack from the constant
pressure.
 

tonight as we lay naked warm
and overflowing with joy,

let's drop the act for a little while..

© 2012 alan khan


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mmmhmm def feelin this one! great stuff...as always! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OMG. that was so epic. i can't say i've read anything on WC that was totally devoted to the act of cunnillingus.

I love the imagery... and the SUs....pense.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Building up the momentum that leads to an overflow of joy has always been your forte'. The line "the black night sky will crack from the constant pressure" definitely partners the image of a star shattered. Good job, AFK!
LLR

Posted 14 Years Ago



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