a cloak.

it's night time sweetie
it's time to wake from our rest
tonight i will continue
to tempt along with test.

you think i really love you baby
and then perhaps maybe i do
but don't think you're in control
i've got a monster hold on you.


you can't deny it sweetie
you're completely taken by me
we're both slave to one another
except not really i am free.



i am a monster
and you love me still
because of my act dear
you're unaware of my will.

modesty and caring is my guise.

cloaking over my blissful sin.

i blind you from the simple truth.

only i can ever win.

 don't mistake my being kind. i am not yours, rather you are mine.

Reviews

[Erin]

Oooo this is deep. And I like the rhyming pattern, it helps with your movement. Your stanzas and uncapitalized words help with how broken and monsterous your speaker seems to be. Good job.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

now that's an interesting interplay within the context of totally non fetish sub/dom perceptions~
and LOL @ Ashley Beth's cheer~

[ashley]

oooh nice poem! i like this!


(and yay for no "p***y"!!)