(insert angst here)

(insert angst here)

A Poem by alan khan
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oh this was fun

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my name is cindy lou
i am in love with you

i may be thirteen
and my behavior borderline obscene

but my love is true
if my name be not cindy lou.

i've been through so much in my life
in my thirteen years so much strife.


i don't even have time for tv anymore
i sure do miss my degrassi for sure.

but the man i love
is in love with another

and who that nother is
is my kid brother.

life is so hard
when you live in a suburb
especially when your lover
is in love with your brother.

i'll take pictures in my mirror
with tear and lots of eye shadow
that way all the ignorant brainless masses sheep
will finally know.

i dont care what you think
i'm only doing me
dont insult my freedom
i dont care if you see.

thats why i post my pics
and write my s****y haikus
because i only express myself
and i dont care about you.

boo hoo hoo.


© 2010 alan khan


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Fast-paced and well thought out. I can tell you had fun with this one. Isn't cindy lou from "when the grinch stole xmas" or whatever that book is called? But this one was different than the other work that I've read from you. Nifty. Fancy. Well, not fancy fancy. But fancy still.
PBP

Posted 14 Years Ago


Haha I loved this, it's a nice sort of parody, but it's still true! Well done :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


wickedly hysterical satire of girls caught in the throat of burbs that ain't innocent at all~

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was somewhat mindblowing. Incredible write.
Hilarious, simple, and ridiculously amazing.

Absolutely love it. :D
100/100
-Coral-

Posted 14 Years Ago


HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! this was just... f*****g amazing... i have tears i'm laughing so hard!
life is so hard
when you live in a suburb
especially when your lover
is in love with your brother.
you should win an award for this poem, i can't stop laughing... brilliant. 1000/100

Posted 14 Years Ago



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alan khan

Mint Hill, NC



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