BANG!

BANG!

A Poem by alan khan

whoa whoa.

theres electric madness running through the air
the air so thick.

ow ow,
it's shocked you honey cause
you hands runs swiftly over me.

feel it feel it.
i said yeah honey i can feel it,
cause tonight we'll be just you and me
running nakedly through the field
field of sinful villaniy.

don't be scared be happy
don't be scared girl cause i slide in through the door
silk like the velvet serpent.


yum yum
can you taste the forbidden tinge
in the air?

do you know what that is my sweet honey?
thats the blood making a mark in the atmosphere.

now let's break for a while,
theres a group of undead walking in the corner,
and there terrible stench ruins the night.

it calls for my attention
oh but dont be
scared!

i'm too silk for them
to be able to f**k with this.



i'll just slip the jacket off my
wide jagged shoulders,

and bust through there jaws like,
i'll be busting through you later on.




boom bam bang!
okay they're done your turn.

BOOM! BAM! BANG! BANG!


(snore)

© 2010 alan khan


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Bang Bang ... Just a note: When I was in 6th grade, I had no idea that bang was slang for f**k ... and of course some of the guys thought it funny to use it as a secret code to make fun of the gals like me who thought to have a good bang was just having plain fun... Anyway, don't wanna snore you ... The silken velvet serpent is an audacious phrase that holds it weighty seeds in gold.. Once again, loads of your pieces has a film noire feel to them and this one is no exception ... Sweet honey, indeed .. Good job, AK ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Bang Bang ... Just a note: When I was in 6th grade, I had no idea that bang was slang for f**k ... and of course some of the guys thought it funny to use it as a secret code to make fun of the gals like me who thought to have a good bang was just having plain fun... Anyway, don't wanna snore you ... The silken velvet serpent is an audacious phrase that holds it weighty seeds in gold.. Once again, loads of your pieces has a film noire feel to them and this one is no exception ... Sweet honey, indeed .. Good job, AK ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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