rain.

rain.

A Poem by alan khan

amazing.

how the pitter patter of rain,
overwhelms one with the bitterest sense of
nostalgia.

for what?

is it just the feeling, of being
surrounded
by that which comes from where we
can't see..

that sends one hurdling into the past?

© 2010 alan khan


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ok now i get it more lol i read the second one first

is it just the feeling, of being
surrounded
by that which comes from where we
can't see..

I dont know if im correct but by your style im taking it you maybe have a big rap influence. This is GOOD , clever. read between the lines. not just ignorant s**t but you still have the whole bold in your face thing and i like it



Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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sensate poetics at their finest~ tactile memories are at times a b***h~ they come on flooding back at sounds/scent/textures~

Posted 14 Years Ago


ok now i get it more lol i read the second one first

is it just the feeling, of being
surrounded
by that which comes from where we
can't see..

I dont know if im correct but by your style im taking it you maybe have a big rap influence. This is GOOD , clever. read between the lines. not just ignorant s**t but you still have the whole bold in your face thing and i like it



Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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