a declaration of the experiment

this is the beginning.

 

 

 

for as long as i have lived, this hypothesis

and formula

and need to boil

 

lay like a splinter in the festered back mind of mine.

 

 

 

i will take the centuries of vermin

of bad

of man

of sweet

of pirate treasure

of cyperpunk

of all that i wish

to not list.

 

 

i will fuse it with my bone

with my heart

with my tears

with my flame

with my balls.

 

 

and live as this.

 

 

 

 

i am the experiment.

the motiveloco.

the first of my kind.

 

a new.

Reviews

[Nish Nish the Fish]

wow!
i love this, alot!
this great declaration that you're gonna be different, and that everyone has to suck it up cus you're gonna put everything you got into it and that its gonna work out.
a hell of a powerful poem,
saying that you're ready to let out everything that's been trapped in your head for so long, its finally time for it to come forth, and idk kick everyone elses' a*s off the face of the earth?
nicely done!

[no one]

This is great. An eclectic collection of things, that make you, simply you! Very well written, I quite enjoyed reading this.

[Eternally Elemental]

Hm, it's all mighty and heroic in our social jungle, but why is it an 'experiment'?

That word 'experiment' speaks doubt to me. An experiment is not used for something that is foolproof, but rather for things that are not completely clean from a possibility of failure.
Definitely the first of a kind. Never read anything like this before. Your use of 'balls' is interesting haha. Keeps it on a casual level to balance the scientific style of vocabulary. Like saying photosynthesis and donuts in the same sentence.

Very out there, very experimental and entertaining. As it is stated at the beginning; "this is the beginning". A declaration worth acknowledging :)

[TamerQtaish]

Damn this piece is amazing!
Great work bro,
I loved it all