writing a poem high after talking on the phone with the love of my life

oh man just not so long ago

i was talking to that girl who loves me so

 

we tlaked and laughed and s**t our pants

she went off on a comedic rant

 

and now i know i cant live without her

im going to live under her stairs forever

 

where we wont be able to have sex

i just figured out if we have a kid we're gonna name him or her rex

 

 

f**k you if the poem i write is s**t

i write because my love for her is legit

 

shes teh reason that i breathe air

shes the reason my soul im nnot afraid to share

 

so when we embrace in summer

i'll whisper in the ear, "you're my lover."

 

 

and i love you

love you

love you

love you

Author's Note

love you

Reviews

[emmajoy]

There's real power to this, yet, it's mixed with tenderness. Your language might be a little too raw for me, but it's your style ..

the ending's like a beginning .. so, why not write the next part ..

[Demmi]

i like it, you wrote this high? lol

[JenLyn]

LOL I liked it...it's cute.