FREE

i threw it all

the sanity and love and comfort

 

 

and i clothed my self in naked.

tore away the bolts and nuts

 

and let the engine run free.

 

 

 

tore away tire

and let the metal scar the road.

 

gave my fists a voice

my voice a rest

my rest a thing now of a past.

 

and wheter drunken madness

or foolish brawls

...

or tender nights.

i remained free.

 

so goodbye to pain

goodbye to sorrow

i'm finally free

and no longer afraid of tommrow.

Author's Note

think nothing of it.

Reviews

[Cassandra D.]

I think it was okay.

[cest la vie]

think alot of it.. wonderful.. one word, FREE..
great piece..

[Buddhistboy73]

like the sentiment bro. great last para too....i believed you..love to hear some more...

[Katie]

This poem was filled with such metaphors, I loved it. The whole idea of being set free is exciting. You are very talented! Just watch some of your spelling errors but over all- it is amazing!

[sheila russ]

"so goodbye to pain
goodbye to sorrow
i'm finally free
and no longer afraid of tomorrow"
These words are a dream I wish to come true for me.
Great poem.