Random

random thoughts

what happened?

the men

the man

you and we used to be

now remains a single dust, lost out to the desert.

 

you no longer lover

you no longer fight.

 

you rely now only on words

stead of sound smell and sight.

 

only in the dreams

and the thoughts in your head

are you ever fully awake

and not afraid of what you said.

 

hold her firm tight and unyielding

in your arms for she is the magic you need.

i know, i used ot be that love

but now i am the hand that feeds.

Reviews

[PhantomDancer]

I like your varied line length, it adds to the atmosphere of your writing.

[Emily?]

This poem is full of emotion and apparently you thought of it well! Great Job!=)

[Holly]

This is where your rhythm starts. Start here:

"only in the dreams

and the thoughts in your head

are you ever fully awake

and not afraid of what you said."