philip k dick was at that party!

haha. highness was wearing off and i fel tlike writing. so this is what came off.

he was!

remember


i had just come down stairs.
the ignorant french maiden had just made love to me..
better yet i had given it to her.
hours after we ingested the holy green.

she screamd and cursed me and called me a fowl american.
i said listen i'm from brooklyn.


and she hollered. unable to resist my power.

her skin warm and leather.
now soft silk under my fingers.

her mouth was a world initself.



but there he was.
over at the punch bowl.

eating and feeding his beard.




he said
"time is not real."

i said stop repeating yourself.

we talked about acts and all.




and i understood.

this illusion
that the world and its puppetears,
of time.
placed over us.

really is a curtain placed over our eyes.
never to be raised to reveal to us the play.

nothing was real.

he laughed and said stop repeating yourself.

we danced and drank and picked fights with the people i had grown with.

the blood on my hands steined my food. enhancing it's taste.


and i was awake from my dream.


because one day, like so many times viewed and warned before.
i wont wake from the dream.



so turn off the lights upstairs.
the body needs to get out.

Reviews

[LeeLee Ryder]

just gotta say, Alan .. once again your words have painted a marvelous story pic..
love the lines.. "her mouth was a world initself." &
"but there he was. over at the punch bowl. eating and feeding his beard." &
"really is a curtain placed over our eyes. never to be raised to reveal to us the play." &
"the blood on my hands steined my food. enhancing it's taste." (U carnivorous dude, you)
& the last line is a killer zomboid phrase.. Might wanna spell check (really= reality .. awake=awaken .....)
Great read... I'm just reading PKDick works.... (holy green must be some Dick concoction)
loved Blade Runner, Minority Report ..movies...
Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LeeLeeDick... (did you know he had a twin sister Jane..who died 5wks after her birth?)
I think I'll write something about her.. J.C. DICK thanks for the inspiration..

[Holly]

hm, I really think you have a knack for the story aspect of writing, and this is just my personal opinion. I'm sure this would make a very interesting tale, should you ever decide to share it with us. Thanks for the read.