mindless male ball scratching

dont think

what used to be the boots to kick
became the sandles of carefree
what used to be an endless hoard of steel
became a time to bathe in the sea

what used to be leather
became scented silk
what used to be the poison of beer
became soy lowfat 1% lactaid free milk

maybe this poem sucks
the stupidest s**t you'll read
but pay attention anyway
its a message you b*****s need


you've softened your resolve
devolved into punks
listening to your tears and crys
stead of your heart and funk

whineing about the air
and about the flowers you cant touch
i understand things must change
but this is too much


what happened to shoulders wide
and the hair on your chest
getting exactly what you want
not settleing for less

a frail creature
a frail one indeed
a weak little b***h
standing up to me


thats the first step
not taking any s**t
but i'm not the one
to start this with.

not saying be an a*****e
but for f***s sake grow a pair
just stop being a b***h on purpose
and stop flat ironing your f*****g hair.

Reviews

[Tough review]

HAHAHA! This was hilarious! And way to true in my opinion.
I loved how there's words like "s**t", "b***h" and "f*****g" in the piece but they aren't over announced, they just come off as words in the poem which is great because a lot of writers who use that language tend to over use them, to the point that the entire piece revolves around the curse words.

[Lorraine]

The reprimanding tone is very entertaining and some of the lines are really funny. Your words flow naturally, and though it's a bit harsh to read, somewhere between the lines, it sort of makes sense.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[CircusNerd]

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha i love this poem sooooooo much like i probably tell at least 4 guys this same thing everyday!!!! :D

[Holly]

*gigglez* love it...

[LeeLee Ryder]

mindless male ball scratching, if it's NOT an Olympic event yet...It should be
Seriously m.m.b.s. is a very humorous & entertaining way to look at what
makes a man..like the Dude says, a pair of testicles makes a man...
Great imagery ..what a fun ride... Loved the language, by the way.
Thanks for sharing