Behind you

Behind you

A Poem by Alfi
"

My love

"
I behind you
My behind you..
I hate you so much
This lie behind you..
You brake my heart cripply
Now cry behind you..
I was forgate myself in you
My shy behind you..
You was my lifeline my love
My die behind you..
I want to ask you love
Why all behind you..
Why all behind you
My all behind you..





© 2023 Alfi


Author's Note

Alfi
Ignore grammar problems

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You break my heart cripply

Lost love is so painful. That loss touched this reader. Some edits required here. I enjoyed my visit.

Chris



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alfi

1 Year Ago

Thank you i first of recite in english i will improve.
A different theme and poem. Good work 👍

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 21, 2023
Last Updated on October 21, 2023
Tags: Broken heart

Author

Alfi
Alfi

Bari, Muslim, India



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