Free

Sometimes we just need to be free.

It seems too long

I've walked this world alone.
I've begun to lose my way.

 

I've begun to stray from my set path.

I now resent the day,

I am lost within my craft.

 

The sun above

Can't give the shove,

The shove I need to wake.

 

It seems the night

Shows more insight

As to whom I was meant to be.

 

It seems deep inside
I secretly cry,

And just wish that I could be,

 

Free

Reviews

[Life Shall Cease]

this is absolutely amazing! and it just made my day, i LOVE the truth and flow in this piece. writing like this is what life needs

[John A Common]

Very good write. I think everybody feels like this sometimes. I also realy like the flow of this poem. Great job.

[~IlOvEcHrIsToPhErBuRnEt..]

Aint that the truth though. I like it. :)