A Love Poem to my Girl

My most recent love poem to my girl, Kersten.

The weight of lack of love unbound,
I listen closely to the sound,
of church bells ringing, as gold harps play,
Cupid’s arrow has come my way.

Around her finger, I slip a ring,
such a glorious, beauteous thing,
with this girl, I’ll spend my life,
together we’ll be, through joy and strife.

My life I’ll give, this wonderful girl,
she’s worth more to me than diamonds and pearls,
each night I lay awake in bed,
as I rest on my pillow, my heavy head,
I picture in my mind her face,
she’ll always in my heart have place.

Reviews

[~IlOvEcHrIsToPhErBuRnEt..]

This is very romantic. :)

[Alex]

How very nice. Thank you, I hope she liked it :)

[Sally Edwards]

Beautiful romantic poem, I enjoyed reading this

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

that would be nice i hope you find her i am looking for mine as well.

[sadxdeathxsuicide]

aawwww thank you , i love the words of describtion you use

[Brenda Sue]

Very well written. I love the rhyme of this piece and the flow but the last line is a little off to me. Beautifully penned.