Confession of a Hero

The confession of a Hero that he is not entirely fearless or unbeatable.

Some people say I must be fearless,
for the challenges I take.
Some people say I must be unbeatable,
for the enemies I face.

But for someone to be fearless,
they must not love.
For someone to be unbeatable,
the must have no weakness.

I do love,
for I love her dearly.
I do have weakness,
for I get so weak when we kiss.

Reviews

[We are young.]

It gave me chills. I love it.

[D Poet K]

something about the last lines, could have been better in my eyes. dont get me wrong it was beautiful but there's just something about it. it is good though, dont get me wrong =)

[sadxdeathxsuicide]

heros have souls and have weaknesses such as emotions just like you have mentioned , amazing piece that you have written

[John Stussy]

Nicely written piece. As long as we love we have a weakness, and loving someone is giving them the power to destroy you but trusting them to not take that opportunity. Good luck with the contest.

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

very nice, which supper hero is it i can think of at least three that have that curse of love. nicely done!

[closed]

hey, i llike this poem. Anything concerning heroes and trials is cool.

thanks for joining my group by the way.

[~crazy Beautiful~]

this was an interesting piece, hero's and love
and the weakness that love makes us all
nice work
thank you for entering my contest