" A suicide note "

The poem is about a suicide letter wrote by a young christian man to his best friend , describing the reason why he killed himself. ( *here alcohol is depicted as angel)

When my efforts all vain
And my life became somber,
Little fragile heart teared up.
Filled my eyes with tears of sorrow,
Happiness became a lost child.

Like a brave man I bloomed out
But I no longer knew the way,
My head began to burn.
Then in the midst of silence,
I saw a beautiful angel.

She pulled me out from darkness
And as days went by,
I experienced the unknown.
Little did I know about her,
But my heart began to heal.

I found delight in her company
She made me strong and powerful,
I can rule the world.
Her presence became my weakness,
I couldn't resist her beauty.

When I left her for awhile,
My body began to glow
But my heart longed for her.
So I decided to stay and touch
Then I became thin and numb.

I found myself living yesterday's life,
Where happiness was a lost child
So I decided to leave her for good,
Then she smiled at me like never before.
And blew me a last burning kiss.

So I dug my own grave in pain,
And lay down to sleep forever.
But my dearest best friend
When your dream remain a dream,
Never fall in love with dark angel.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Dark angels will break your heart.
"When your dream remain a dream,
Never fall in love with dark angel."
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Akum Imsong'er]

Eee.. 😊😊 Thankyou so much Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.