I can't feel anything

These days i feel like nothing...people understand me in a wrong way.. if i say something..things will get worse ..

I can't feel anything

not a single space

Impossible to conceive  

why people react in different  ways

Sometimes I feel like crying

taking my emotions coming from behind..

If you judge me that means you don't love me 

Its hard to express,

harder to impress..

Sometimes clearing doubts 

does not solve anything

a hint of pain can be seen

You can trust someone once

but you cannot hate them twice

Life is always balanced

You have to think wise

Stand yourself back

Give them another chance

I really can't go on this way

Because I can't feel anything

not a single space

Author's Note

Honest reviews please...
your time is very important for me..thanks for reviewing my work so far:)

Reviews

[K.C. Zbryk]

The turbulent emotions in this piece overwhelm the reader and flow seamlessly from one strong statement to another. I think this piece shows the weary side of someone who daily puts a piece of themselves out only to be misunderstood. We all feel this way at one point or another, but i also have to add that it created a very powerful piece of poetry as well. Phenomenal work.

[Caramel]

It flowed well, but I didn't really get it...

:S

But I still enjoyed reading it. Keep it up. xx

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Oh such feelings in this wonderfully expressed write. Nice bits of rhyming as well in the flow of the poem. I love how you share the feelings in this so nicely. Love this part:
"You can trust someone once
but you cannot hate them twice"
Hugs to you.

[manifesto]

This piece is beautiful and so full of raw emotion. I can feel every feeling you've written down, and I can relate to it, too. Keep writing, you're amazing. :)

[LonelySoul]

try not to dwell in your lil shell,I know you must be going through hell...
your tears will not water the roses at your feet,nor can we live in the past...try to learn and not make the same mistakes twice...this numb feeling will pass in time...take two twinkies with milk and call me in the morning

[Amila Jay]

A very emotional write. Nice poem :))

[Morrigan Nicole]

Honestly it was a bit confusing to me, but I liked it all the same. Keep it up, I would like to read more.

[Sunflower 20]

i liked the way you ended with the beginning, it wrapped up the whole thing very nicely. i also liked the issues expressed here, things such as being misunderstood are very easy to relate to. overall, nice job :)

[Dearantlers]

I loved the stanza,
"If you judge me that means you don't love me
Its hard to express,
Harder to impress.."
Beautiful! Thanks so much for the read request!

[Ripple of Aqua]

This is a very troubled time, where you question everything around you like you gain knowledge by just asking. It's a great piece.