I can't feel anything

These days i feel like nothing...people understand me in a wrong way.. if i say something..things will get worse ..

I can't feel anything

not a single space

Impossible to conceive  

why people react in different  ways

Sometimes I feel like crying

taking my emotions coming from behind..

If you judge me that means you don't love me 

Its hard to express,

harder to impress..

Sometimes clearing doubts 

does not solve anything

a hint of pain can be seen

You can trust someone once

but you cannot hate them twice

Life is always balanced

You have to think wise

Stand yourself back

Give them another chance

I really can't go on this way

Because I can't feel anything

not a single space

Author's Note

Honest reviews please...
your time is very important for me..thanks for reviewing my work so far:)

Reviews

[K.C. Zbryk]

The turbulent emotions in this piece overwhelm the reader and flow seamlessly from one strong statement to another. I think this piece shows the weary side of someone who daily puts a piece of themselves out only to be misunderstood. We all feel this way at one point or another, but i also have to add that it created a very powerful piece of poetry as well. Phenomenal work.

[Nupur]

You can trust someone once
but you cannot hate them twice
this is so very true emotion of human nature u have mentioned in words

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Melissa Edmunds]

You touched on reality with this one. Life is a emotional rollercoaster and you just put it into words. Well done..

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[quinfinn]

too many of us treat life like a beauty contest. the sad thing is that none of us are qualified to judge the other. you have captured that element of humanity well in this poignant and disturbing write. nicely done!

[Akshat♥]

You are absolutely right here...thank you :)

[AYVID N]

Life is always balanced
You have to think wise.... Theres wisdom and ...great writing here. Many thanks, DN

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[AYVID N]

You are welcome. Keep writing! :)

[Jason Dyer]

I enjoy all the truths expressed in this one. It isn't often that you find a poem that aims to teach.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Adelia Alighieri]

It's like sometimes we just need a way to express what we feel, regardless of everything that limits our expression. Very well done.

[Akshat♥]

Yeah we do...

[alegria]

loved the write...emotional and nice...loved this line "You can trust someone once
but you cannot hate them twice"...amazing...

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[FocusedAmnesia]

My goodness, part of me is feeling this right now. This piece holds emotions that many can relate to.

[Akshat♥]

thank you :)

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

This is such a sad thing! So many people in the world are forced to feel this way its not right and its not fair but its how it is and nothing is going to change that anytime soon. This is such a tribute and has so many emotions. Its just wonderful! it also has a good rythme which I have found in many poems is something lacking. So good on you for that!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[the_stoic]

I see you have evolved as a writer . good going !

[Akshat♥]

thank you so much :)