I can't feel anything

These days i feel like nothing...people understand me in a wrong way.. if i say something..things will get worse ..

I can't feel anything

not a single space

Impossible to conceive  

why people react in different  ways

Sometimes I feel like crying

taking my emotions coming from behind..

If you judge me that means you don't love me 

Its hard to express,

harder to impress..

Sometimes clearing doubts 

does not solve anything

a hint of pain can be seen

You can trust someone once

but you cannot hate them twice

Life is always balanced

You have to think wise

Stand yourself back

Give them another chance

I really can't go on this way

Because I can't feel anything

not a single space

Author's Note

Honest reviews please...
your time is very important for me..thanks for reviewing my work so far:)

Reviews

[K.C. Zbryk]

The turbulent emotions in this piece overwhelm the reader and flow seamlessly from one strong statement to another. I think this piece shows the weary side of someone who daily puts a piece of themselves out only to be misunderstood. We all feel this way at one point or another, but i also have to add that it created a very powerful piece of poetry as well. Phenomenal work.

[Ravyne Hawke]

You've done a wonderful job revealing the emotions of loneliness, numbness, fear of rejection, and sadness. It seems that the protagonist is more concerned with impressing others and having others like him than he is about being true to himself. I believe that is why the numbness is so prevalent in this piece. Wonderful job.

[Akshat♥]

I just can't feel anything at that point of time.. lol :D
So i wrote this poem...
Thank you dear :)

[NebraskaHope]

I love it !

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear..means a lot to me :)

[beautiful life]

Sometime I feel exactly same...
I can relate to this poem :)
Thanks for sharing it with me

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Dakshta]

That's what people always do, misunderstand us. But it's on us how we handel our self. Nice write :)

[Akshat♥]

yeah..u said it right..Thank you :)

[Dakshta]

welcome :)

[Akshat♥]

(^_*)

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

swayed and satiated...nicely penned :)

[Akshat♥]

thank you :)

[Bridget Mcmaken]

Wonderful write, sad but wonderful. I loved it and thought it was very well written. I love this one so much. Thank you for writing a wonderful piece and sending it to me.
~Bridget Lynn~

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Bridget Mcmaken]

No problem =)

[Anuvart]

sad write..but really nice

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Hitman]

I have the same feelings...nicely written piece:)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Your regret is justified!
Giving another chance also takes a toll on the giver!
Judging from your own words...its an appeal for acceptance and hoping not for rejection...
i dunno..
but it seems sincere.
Nice

[Akshat♥]

Thank you for the honest words:)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes of course!

[amdc101]

I agree with everything in the featured review and can't come up with a better way to say it myself. I really loved this and could completely relate to the emotion behind it

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)