I can't feel anything

These days i feel like nothing...people understand me in a wrong way.. if i say something..things will get worse ..

I can't feel anything

not a single space

Impossible to conceive  

why people react in different  ways

Sometimes I feel like crying

taking my emotions coming from behind..

If you judge me that means you don't love me 

Its hard to express,

harder to impress..

Sometimes clearing doubts 

does not solve anything

a hint of pain can be seen

You can trust someone once

but you cannot hate them twice

Life is always balanced

You have to think wise

Stand yourself back

Give them another chance

I really can't go on this way

Because I can't feel anything

not a single space

Author's Note

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your time is very important for me..thanks for reviewing my work so far:)

Reviews

[K.C. Zbryk]

The turbulent emotions in this piece overwhelm the reader and flow seamlessly from one strong statement to another. I think this piece shows the weary side of someone who daily puts a piece of themselves out only to be misunderstood. We all feel this way at one point or another, but i also have to add that it created a very powerful piece of poetry as well. Phenomenal work.

[Manpreet]

Its a plea for understanding and also conveying very important message that Hate is later thing and understanding is first. An interesting write.!

[Maan]

Each word expressed the writer, that how deep he can think and can go into the depth of 'emotions'.

Life is always balanced
You have to think wise

Beautifully said. . Overall, its really brilliant, a piece you can read again and again.

[EMMIE]

Awesome! Very creative, unique and very well composed!

[Shy Girl]

Just so many emotions play in my head as I read through this piece. I can relate as well to the feeling of being "invisible" to the rest of the world. Tends to make one not feel or want to feel anything at all. Just an empty vessel going from one space to the next. :) Also the misunderstood emotion as if nobody gets it..frustrating :)

[Owlgirl]

This is an exceptional piece, very well done, and has a melencholy bittersweet tenderness. Lovely lovely lovely work!

[~ Twilight~]

"Its hard to express ...harder to impress" .its a beautiful write :-) I can relate to it ..

[Sarah]

Powerful and full of emotion

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokhar..]

Ups-downs makes life persists- you may not impress - as you may think--
But impressing is not the art of achieving- Be neutral to this world and see how your neutrality affects the world around you-

Good piece !

[Kruppz]

You know I can identify with this feeling of being misunderstood & being cheated on. Nice flow. The flow is a very important aspect I look for in a poetry. Simple yet beautiful expression of emotions.

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Wow, it really has a whole lot of emotion. Its like a bottle filled with so many mixed emotions, any more and the bottle will explode. Its really lovely dear.