I can't feel anything

These days i feel like nothing...people understand me in a wrong way.. if i say something..things will get worse ..

I can't feel anything

not a single space

Impossible to conceive  

why people react in different  ways

Sometimes I feel like crying

taking my emotions coming from behind..

If you judge me that means you don't love me 

Its hard to express,

harder to impress..

Sometimes clearing doubts 

does not solve anything

a hint of pain can be seen

You can trust someone once

but you cannot hate them twice

Life is always balanced

You have to think wise

Stand yourself back

Give them another chance

I really can't go on this way

Because I can't feel anything

not a single space

Author's Note

Honest reviews please...
your time is very important for me..thanks for reviewing my work so far:)

Reviews

[K.C. Zbryk]

The turbulent emotions in this piece overwhelm the reader and flow seamlessly from one strong statement to another. I think this piece shows the weary side of someone who daily puts a piece of themselves out only to be misunderstood. We all feel this way at one point or another, but i also have to add that it created a very powerful piece of poetry as well. Phenomenal work.

[Brittni]

It's very intense and I know these feelings myself all too well. You really brought the emotions to life with very simple words and you can apply this to any situation. I really enjoy this.

[Ramya]

Hmm...this is an intense poem. Can feel the emotions right through. It is good to go through what we are actually going through - though inexplicable, it provides scope for self-introspection.

A fantastic read!

[Black]

its hard breaking...
i understand how you feel,
here and there some grammer mistakes.
but its a lovely poem...
really

[Leslie Philibert]

What I liked the change from two to three line verses, it gains a very vocative
character, it sounds really real and echoes a plea very well, so you did very well here.

[stars are far]

This is so nice ..

[Kes]

I know this feeling. I know it every second of the day.
Beautifully expressed.
K

[MandaBear]

Awwww I feel those feelings sometimes too. I know you can get through it :) Great job and thank you for sharing you work so far with me:)

[light and ashes]

I know the feeling that you express here...When almost everyone you know has started putting you down even the whos who are supposed to love you. Nice honest and sincere poem.

[Carrion.]

this is very relatable, and it has pure emotion for the lack of it.
CONTRADICTION!?
I just love this.(:

[eglantine]

I really enjoyed the first/last stanza. The whole idea of not being able to feel a "space"