Numb

When we fall, we need lot of courage to stand up.. this poem shows the pain inside us...

 
         Huge scream

      Heavy noise

      High tension

      Large Illusion

      Long pain

      Little darkness

     Afraid to lose

     Taking risks

     Lot of Expectations

 

     Why I am afraid

     I don't know, I can't see

     I am my worst enemy

 

     You look around and all you see is hurt

     And I am the one who can't be saved

     Hiding myself behind the caves

     People asking me questions

     and I have nothing to enunciate

     Life is too short ,

     Lot of decisions to make

     Good things come to those who wait

     I am running out of space

     I stayed where my last step left me

     Maybe I am the one to blame

       Maybe we are all same...

 

Author's Note

Read it tell me what you think about it...
I have written a poem after a long time..
I hope you will like it:)

Reviews

[Frieda P]

This poem makes a lot of noise, and raises many questions....we are all one in the same, it takes courage to wake up in the morning and look at ourselves, just to breathe each day can be a challenge. I think you've connected the dots with this one! Nice....

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[MandaBear]

I loved the way you wrote this. very creative. you showed so much emotion in one poem. really enjoyed this.

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

Wow this is beautiful, this is exactly how many of us feel today,a nd you showed such emotion with this and I really enjoyed reading this!

[joshua deathdealer]

This is great. I like the fast paceness and the emotions. Nice work.

[Amila Jay]

This is brilliant!! Very much felt and very true indeed. Awesome poem :))

[The adventurer]

A good poem, well written .

I have been experiencing this problem from few months,your poem provides me idea to deal with the situation.

[Hatchling]

Great poem

[fernii]

Love it! great poem, everyone can literally relate to this :)

[Alexa Tasch]

I really liked the beginging. This was well written and deep. This poem really is about pain and you conveyed your message clearly. Good job!

[Lily Mae]

Even then we will someday move on..but it's where we are in the invisible movement that we are going to so many places within ourselves so the next physical step will feel like a leap...xo

[Kes]

I love this. It's not confusing, as much as confused and I like the turmoil it creates. I recognise every feeling portrayed.
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