Numb

When we fall, we need lot of courage to stand up.. this poem shows the pain inside us...

 
         Huge scream

      Heavy noise

      High tension

      Large Illusion

      Long pain

      Little darkness

     Afraid to lose

     Taking risks

     Lot of Expectations

 

     Why I am afraid

     I don't know, I can't see

     I am my worst enemy

 

     You look around and all you see is hurt

     And I am the one who can't be saved

     Hiding myself behind the caves

     People asking me questions

     and I have nothing to enunciate

     Life is too short ,

     Lot of decisions to make

     Good things come to those who wait

     I am running out of space

     I stayed where my last step left me

     Maybe I am the one to blame

       Maybe we are all same...

 

Author's Note

Read it tell me what you think about it...
I have written a poem after a long time..
I hope you will like it:)

Reviews

[Frieda P]

This poem makes a lot of noise, and raises many questions....we are all one in the same, it takes courage to wake up in the morning and look at ourselves, just to breathe each day can be a challenge. I think you've connected the dots with this one! Nice....

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Hmm, the flow and rythm of this is really harmonial and balanced. I love how you emphasized the words with colors and bold print really nice touch there. Nicely done.

[Suditi]

The flow is wonderful.
The last stanza is my favorite.
The style of writing is also great.
A very well done piece.

[Morrigan Nicole]

Good things come to those who wait.
That is true, I can tell you know. If I had not been one of patients, my life would stink worse than a landfill.

[Black]

i love the first last stanza,,
well done, it's a beautifull poem

[the_stoic]

the ending was like an icing on the cake .. i can see your writes maturing with time .. kudos !

[Siena - Silent Awakenin..]

The last verse sums it up, I love your utter determination... and also admire you for grabbing my attention. loved it!

[Coyote Poetry]

'Why I am afraid
I don't know, I can't see
I am my worst enemy"
In life we are our worth enemy. Hard to see any good on ourselves. I like the ending. We are all the same. Want a safe place to live, a good job and to know happiness. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

You've done really well regarding this poem. Most poetry is incapable of holding my attention, but I enjoyed the tone and the emotion!

[Chris]

I liked the flavor of the words as they flowed. The tones were comfortable and held me.

[Stella]

Was a great poem. I loved it. keep up the good work :P