Numb

When we fall, we need lot of courage to stand up.. this poem shows the pain inside us...

 
         Huge scream

      Heavy noise

      High tension

      Large Illusion

      Long pain

      Little darkness

     Afraid to lose

     Taking risks

     Lot of Expectations

 

     Why I am afraid

     I don't know, I can't see

     I am my worst enemy

 

     You look around and all you see is hurt

     And I am the one who can't be saved

     Hiding myself behind the caves

     People asking me questions

     and I have nothing to enunciate

     Life is too short ,

     Lot of decisions to make

     Good things come to those who wait

     I am running out of space

     I stayed where my last step left me

     Maybe I am the one to blame

       Maybe we are all same...

 

Author's Note

Read it tell me what you think about it...
I have written a poem after a long time..
I hope you will like it:)

Reviews

[Frieda P]

This poem makes a lot of noise, and raises many questions....we are all one in the same, it takes courage to wake up in the morning and look at ourselves, just to breathe each day can be a challenge. I think you've connected the dots with this one! Nice....

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Krystal17]

Lovely lines. Very thought-provoking

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Prritiy]

ah the pain and the strength needed to get up after the fall.... after the physical fall... after the mental, emotional fall.....
nice one :) liked it

and yes we all are the same, scared in our heart :)

[Akshat♥]

I totally agree with you:)
Thank you dear :)

[Prritiy]

welcome :)
this time you find my words ok, hmm :)

[Akshat♥]

more than ok..take care :)

[Prritiy]

u too take care :)

[Akshat♥]

Sure! thnx:)

[Muse]

I think I understand now why your poetry seems to touch so many here on the cafe. You give that little child inside you a voice...this voice is a beautiful reminder of who we are...and what we ought to be.

Good things come to those who wait

I am running out of space

I stayed where my last step left me

Maybe I am the one to blame

Maybe we are all same...


"perfect...so simple..but perfect"

:))

[Akshat♥]

I personally don't know about my poetry and where it stands..
and yes i am child who is trying to give a strong voice :)
Thank you so much dear...means a lot to me :)
Keep reading!!

[Muse]

I think I understand now why your poetry seems to touch so many here on the cafe. You give that little child inside your a voice...this voice is a beautiful reminder of who we are...and what we ought to be.

Good things come to those who wait

I am running out of space

I stayed where my last step left me

Maybe I am the one to blame

Maybe we are all same...


"perfect...so simple..but perfect"

:))

[beautiful life]

I really liked the last para..
filled with truth. emotional too :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Dakshta]

Standing up again is really hard but at the same time really important..Really nice write :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Dakshta]

welcome :)

[Akshat♥]

:P

[Anusha Prabhu]

Gosh...just look at the truckload of feelings involved...BINGO!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you anusha :)

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

And this is the best :)

[Akshat♥]

thank you..means a lot to me :)

[Paridhi]

This is something different..good job!!

[Akshat♥]

Thanks paridhi :)

[Purva Pathak]

supalike...... :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)