Happy To Know You Still Care

You can't predict anything in life...

Most Beautiful music in the world is your own heartbeat.

It gives an assurance that you will survive 

even when the whole world leaves you alone...

and my heartbeat is you

Starting phase of love begins with friendship

and keeping a friend is as difficult as losing one

you sacrifice a lot to keep them.

I may not have sacrified enough for you..

but in my heart I swear am keeping you

Once I wish to have a key to your heart

now I have the heart but the key is lost forever...

We had a fight

We stop talking to each other

Days pass by

I still feel the sense of your touch

How you make me smile

Now those days are over...

We always fight about stupid things

and regret later..

We always feel sorry

and do it again

On my birthday you gave me a rose

and said goodbye..

I was so stupid to think for

one second you actually cared..

Author's Note

Review it and give your honest views...I am waiting:)

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

It would be more inviting to know who this poem is for, but whoever it was lost a valuable friend --anyone who understands that "the most beautiful music is a heartbeat and that heartbeat is for you" would be a good friend indeed. This poem has a nice flow and is SO well written. Thanks, and excellent work!

[Ripple of Aqua]

So sweet and gentle is your voice. It's comforting when I read your work. Thank you.

[reema]

Most Beautiful music in the world is your own heartbeat.

a nice piece of writing buddy:)

[Dearantlers]

This is absolutely beautiful! I loved it.

[manifesto]

This is a wonderful piece, and the first four lines are absolutely beautifully heartbreaking!

[Timtim]

raw angry emotion... if thats your thing then its a great piece, but i think a little refinement will be great for it.

[misha]

I love this write! it is so heartfelt and beautiful. You did a great job on this. You are an amazing writer and your work is always intriguing

[futurepast.]

The emotions you wanted to project could be felt in this write and I loved a lot of lines like "Most Beautiful music in the world is your own heartbeat." or "Once I wish to have a key to your heart, now I have the heart but the key is lost forever...". Nice one.

[Valentine]

A bit hard to understand...as being in love and beaten have to death does not leave one still caring for the other..Believe me..Kathie

[Wandering Violet]

The poem and pictures are so true, showing us the complex side to our emotions.

[TheSweet]

This is beautiful. It tells an entire story in so few words. I especially love the metaphor with losing the key to her heart but keeping the heart itself. This is such a shame how it ends really, because it's so beautifully written - Its one of the rare ones I wished had a happy end.