Happy To Know You Still Care

You can't predict anything in life...

Most Beautiful music in the world is your own heartbeat.

It gives an assurance that you will survive 

even when the whole world leaves you alone...

and my heartbeat is you

Starting phase of love begins with friendship

and keeping a friend is as difficult as losing one

you sacrifice a lot to keep them.

I may not have sacrified enough for you..

but in my heart I swear am keeping you

Once I wish to have a key to your heart

now I have the heart but the key is lost forever...

We had a fight

We stop talking to each other

Days pass by

I still feel the sense of your touch

How you make me smile

Now those days are over...

We always fight about stupid things

and regret later..

We always feel sorry

and do it again

On my birthday you gave me a rose

and said goodbye..

I was so stupid to think for

one second you actually cared..

Author's Note

Review it and give your honest views...I am waiting:)

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

It would be more inviting to know who this poem is for, but whoever it was lost a valuable friend --anyone who understands that "the most beautiful music is a heartbeat and that heartbeat is for you" would be a good friend indeed. This poem has a nice flow and is SO well written. Thanks, and excellent work!

[amdc101]

The raw and honest truth. Well done.

[Roy]

Well written, felt personal.

One word of suggestion, try not to change the person once you have fixed one. I would have loved it more had it stayed 'you' throughout and not switched to 'she' in between.

[Suditi]

A very touching poem.
It flows well.
The first line is simply beautiful.
Very well written.

[BiroPen]

[Huggy Bear]

Lovely Piece

[Lulubel]

I like this poem. To me it seems to be about regret, and you express it so well.

[Megan]

I love your ability to express what you're saying in such normal words and phrases, yet your words and phrases still sound very poetic. "and keeping a friend is as difficult as losing one".

[Roxie Demonia]

i enjoy this poem.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Beautiful and very touching.. Great write!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

A touching and heartfelt write. Nicely done!