Happy To Know You Still Care

You can't predict anything in life...

Most Beautiful music in the world is your own heartbeat.

It gives an assurance that you will survive 

even when the whole world leaves you alone...

and my heartbeat is you

Starting phase of love begins with friendship

and keeping a friend is as difficult as losing one

you sacrifice a lot to keep them.

I may not have sacrified enough for you..

but in my heart I swear am keeping you

Once I wish to have a key to your heart

now I have the heart but the key is lost forever...

We had a fight

We stop talking to each other

Days pass by

I still feel the sense of your touch

How you make me smile

Now those days are over...

We always fight about stupid things

and regret later..

We always feel sorry

and do it again

On my birthday you gave me a rose

and said goodbye..

I was so stupid to think for

one second you actually cared..

Author's Note

Review it and give your honest views...I am waiting:)

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

It would be more inviting to know who this poem is for, but whoever it was lost a valuable friend --anyone who understands that "the most beautiful music is a heartbeat and that heartbeat is for you" would be a good friend indeed. This poem has a nice flow and is SO well written. Thanks, and excellent work!

[Heather]

Such beauty in reading in between the lines
I love it :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

Hi girl, I...went to re-read this and.. it took a different meaning for me. >.< it actually hurt. Because i've gone through some loss over certain people this year. And i know how painful it is to lose someone you thought that cared.. but somehow losing them.. And its true. Life is unpredictable. And i love the picture at the bottom. It is true as well. Sometimes it is the person you didn't think you wanted is the one you need the most.. thanks for this. = )

[Akshat&hearts;]

I really appreciate your review..by the way i am a boy

[Sleeping Maiden]

>.< oh..im so sorry. XDD >.< i didn't mean to.. XD

[Akshat&hearts;]

rofl :D

[Sleeping Maiden]

>.< ??

[Akshat&hearts;]

same as XDD

[Sleeping Maiden]

oh.. >.< okies...

[Nupur]

sometimes its difficult to make someone understand that how imp. they r in your life and u need them the most, we try hard but its not in our hand to keep ur relationship alive but yes it always stay in your heart and with every beat u can feel it.......

[Akshat&hearts;]

You are absolutely right here...Sometimes the thing we wanted is not always in our hand..but if we hard real hard than I am sure we should get it...if not than it never was :(
thank you for the reviews..I really appreciate it..

[Alicia Schroeder]

This was absolutely beautiful.. Great write :)

[Akshat&hearts;]

Thank you:)

[alegria]

nice write....written from ur heart n exp with makes it perfect...keep writing:))

[Akshat&hearts;]

Thank you:)

[Otsana]

There is no doubt that losing someone you love can be painful and hard to get over and I think that it hurts so much more because as you say above "Starting phase of love begins with friendship" therefore it is like losing two people, your friend and your partner. However, the "most Beautiful music in the world is your own heartbeat. It gives an assurance that you will survive", well I think that says it all, we survive in the end. Great poem!

[Akshat&hearts;]

Thank you:)

[Loner]

Amazing and an awesome write ....

[Akshat&hearts;]

Thank you:)

[Loner]

U are always welcome as its a treat to read what
u write as u write straight from your heart and
inked in your blood which is a stream running in a
slight touch of pain now and then , which makes
u an awesome writer no doubt.........

[Akshat&hearts;]

:)

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

I liked it a lot. I can tell you wrote from your heart, from real experience. that always makes the best poetry. thanks for sharing.

[kaylynnmelody♥]

this poem brought some tears to my eyes. i really enjoyed it. thank you for the read request. i really dont have any complaints with the poem. thank you.

[Nirmala]

As time goes by and maturity hits, the first realisation is to treasure friendship above all other things in the world! To treat friends with care and show them they are important and needed is by far the greatest learning for when things get tough it is friends who stand by to support you. I like the verse
'Starting phase of love begins with friendship
and keeping a friend is as difficult as losing one
you sacrifice a lot to keep them.'
The sadness of the loss is well expressed!