Happy To Know You Still Care

You can't predict anything in life...

Most Beautiful music in the world is your own heartbeat.

It gives an assurance that you will survive 

even when the whole world leaves you alone...

and my heartbeat is you

Starting phase of love begins with friendship

and keeping a friend is as difficult as losing one

you sacrifice a lot to keep them.

I may not have sacrified enough for you..

but in my heart I swear am keeping you

Once I wish to have a key to your heart

now I have the heart but the key is lost forever...

We had a fight

We stop talking to each other

Days pass by

I still feel the sense of your touch

How you make me smile

Now those days are over...

We always fight about stupid things

and regret later..

We always feel sorry

and do it again

On my birthday you gave me a rose

and said goodbye..

I was so stupid to think for

one second you actually cared..

Author's Note

Review it and give your honest views...I am waiting:)

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

It would be more inviting to know who this poem is for, but whoever it was lost a valuable friend --anyone who understands that "the most beautiful music is a heartbeat and that heartbeat is for you" would be a good friend indeed. This poem has a nice flow and is SO well written. Thanks, and excellent work!

[Keevan]

Beautiful...

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

it made me cry ....Beautiful music in the world is your own heartbeat.

"It gives an assurance that you will survive
even when the whole world leaves you alone...
and my heartbeat is you

Starting phase of love begins with friendship
and keeping a friend is as difficult as losing one
you sacrifice a lot to keep them.

I may not have sacrified enough for you..
but in my heart I swear am keeping you

Once I wish to have a key to your heart
now I have the heart but the key is lost forever..."
this part of your best was Brilliant , ending may need some working on ..
just keep following your thread ...
first poem to make me cry for long while, if ever,.. Great great first half!

[Katseye]

wow really good, and so sad. But just because they say goodbye doesn't mean they didn't care. Sometimes goodbye is the kindest thing a person can say. A clean cut vrs. killing you slowly.

[Hannah Paige]

I liked the beginning, but as the poem continued, i felt that you needed to show more and tell less.

[Brianna Brie]

Well, there is my answer then...I still care. This poem put a heavy weight in my chest. Certainly words that many people can relate to. Nicely done.

[Brook Hughes]

Wow... this is soo beautiful! very descriptive and well written. My most favorite part: Once I wish to have a key to your heart
now I have the heart but the key is lost forever... that part really caught my attention. Very beautiful:) Keep writing

[Boldpen]

Greatly written... the spun web of emotions is brilliant.
The words were beautifully chosen.
Great write.....
on second note.. the pics were really cool.

[EMF]

To be brutally honest, it is superb. Probably not what you're expecting. You may be expecting people to comment on grammar, or typo's or who knows what, but it tansfixed me from first to last. I became lots in the sadness of your words, and the ending was a true killer. Wonderful job.

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This was really good. I like the pics. It sure does go with the theme of the poem. Also it feels good to know someone still cares about you in this cruel world.

[Canicus]

wow, so filled with love. Turning it to dissapointment in the end, This is wonderful.