Waiting is all I have

well waiting is never easy but when you do not have a choice.. you have to wait for it..

Waiting is something too easy to say

quite callous to understand

Those feelings that I know you had for me

are dead

You crushed my heart like a cigarette

You said you loved me

You said you cared

But now I realized you are just a faker

So now I am left alone in your past

You left me down on a road of hatred

I am still waiting for you on my knees

I know you did not even care

I wish one day you will realize 

how easy it is to say no

When you are screwed from all sides

you only wish to be aside

Waiting is all I have

but remember you are in my thoughts

Author's Note

please give honest reviews as you always do...just rate it too
if you hate it say it..
if you love it..i can judge it

Reviews

[Erica Daubert]

i really liked the "crushed like a cigarette" line. definitely original. i've read a lot of "crushed hearts" lines but that was a first for me. I dig this. I've been there, man. Some people get off more just by f*****g with someones head than actually loving them. It's a type of abuse that most don't recognize because most only associate abuse with violence. That's not always the case. My best advice to you is to leave this person in the past. If they don't want you now... they probably never will. A harsh reality... but you deserve someone that instantly wants you forever, that love at first sight s**t. i hope you find someone that can make you happy. this person just sounds like they're making you cry. good luck in the future. i'll check out some more of your work.

[Akshat♥]

I will try...Thank you...means a lot to me :)

[Raven Starhawk]

Waiting and waiting can wreck a heart. This was penned wonderfully.

[Serenity]

I Loved it, the Darkness and love, the way you described your feelings. Everyone waits for love but sometimes you just have to go out and find it.

[EMF]

I loved it. Loved the darkness and evnom. Its love and dark brilliance. Great write.

[RISHABH ARORA]

wow !!!!!!!!!!!! hey nice one !!! i like the way uve used time to describe ur feelings !! :D... keep it up :D

[WritersSoul]

Not my cup of tea, but i get the feeling, its like sick at the back of your throat... (sick i know) but its still there even though you washed it down :( This feeling killed me and made me who i am today, even if people hate it or not, other than that well done :)
Beth :3

[Akshat♥]

I know this poem is little bit confusing ..its love
Love has confusions ...
when you love someone deeply..even they left you
with some reason you don't know about..
you hate them..but in reality you want them back no matter what:(

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I agree with Chris Taylor

Waiting is such a b***h

"Those feelings that I know you had for me
is dead"

I think it would sound better if you changed "is" to "are" but thats just my opinion

[Chris Taylor]

I think this might be over-done in premise and use. The word selection is pretty common and it isn't as good as your other work.

[Michael of Gilead]

Confusing, you started with a good premise...

Yes, one waits for love, but when they know (to the degree this person knows) it's not....why still wait?

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aaa! what a deep poem that brought the emotion to the surface. beautiful job with the words and the picture was fit well.