Waiting is all I have

well waiting is never easy but when you do not have a choice.. you have to wait for it..

Waiting is something too easy to say

quite callous to understand

Those feelings that I know you had for me

are dead

You crushed my heart like a cigarette

You said you loved me

You said you cared

But now I realized you are just a faker

So now I am left alone in your past

You left me down on a road of hatred

I am still waiting for you on my knees

I know you did not even care

I wish one day you will realize 

how easy it is to say no

When you are screwed from all sides

you only wish to be aside

Waiting is all I have

but remember you are in my thoughts

Author's Note

please give honest reviews as you always do...just rate it too
if you hate it say it..
if you love it..i can judge it

Reviews

[Erica Daubert]

i really liked the "crushed like a cigarette" line. definitely original. i've read a lot of "crushed hearts" lines but that was a first for me. I dig this. I've been there, man. Some people get off more just by f*****g with someones head than actually loving them. It's a type of abuse that most don't recognize because most only associate abuse with violence. That's not always the case. My best advice to you is to leave this person in the past. If they don't want you now... they probably never will. A harsh reality... but you deserve someone that instantly wants you forever, that love at first sight s**t. i hope you find someone that can make you happy. this person just sounds like they're making you cry. good luck in the future. i'll check out some more of your work.

[Akshat♥]

I will try...Thank you...means a lot to me :)

[Sarah]

It is strange but good. nice work.

[Sleepless]

i hate it ! see you can not judge it just kidding this is sad but still amzing !!!! write :) i love this :)

[Coyote Poetry]

To me waiting is very hard. Minutes can feel like hours. I like the desire and the emotion in the words. A very nice ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[∂αʌ<..]

simple...but one thing i dont agree...its not always easy to say no....

other than that...this poem just reflect pain! deep pain!

[Dayran]

The walrus is always on its knees too. It lives its life that way, some would say in greater adoration of the creator than most. I guess it must be waiting too. A great poem about the travails of faith with an ambivalent doubt regarding ' Am I doing enough?'

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Nice and simple and to the point.

[EMMIE]

AW SAD. IT'S NOT EASY TO HAVE PATIENCE. BUT THIS IS HEARTBREAKING. WAY TO CAPTURE THAT INTO A POEM. GREAT JOB!

[unknown]

Yes waiting is hard i must say, i write about this alot patience, waiting, and time.

[Lily Mae]

Very heartbreaking.. it stinks to wait for love.. to stay on your knees.. you have expressed this pain and emotion well..xxx